Fucking rival

[gotnotime]

Valerie and I have known each other since young, when we were neighbours.
However, she have had this superiority complex that she should win in everything since young.
I, On the other hand, didn't quite care about such things, and only gave my best, and beat her at everything everytime.
Be it grades, appointments in class, etc.

Despite this rivalry, we were good friends who'd still hang out in our free time, even though we didn't think of it as a date like everyone else.

Soon, we graduated and went to the same secondary school, same class and even joined the same CCA, NPCC. Our rivalry didn't stop though, and soon we were among the top in class.

That rivalry soon took a turn when she suddenly collapsed during a training for a fancy drill competition..

[Skyboy1988]

Originally Posted by gotnotime

Valerie and I have known each other since young, when we were neighbours.
However, she have had this superiority complex that she should win in everything since young.
I, On the other hand, didn't quite care about such things, and only gave my best, and beat her at everything everytime.
Be it grades, appointments in class, etc.

Despite this rivalry, we were good friends who'd still hang out in our free time, even though we didn't think of it as a date like everyone else.

Soon, we graduated and went to the same secondary school, same class and even joined the same CCA, NPCC. Our rivalry didn't stop though, and soon we were among the top in class.

That rivalry soon took a turn when she suddenly collapsed during a training for a fancy drill competition..

Fucking a rival seems hot.. It will be hotter if u two wasn't tht friendly to each other..

[alan0338]

camp here ...

[luvuass]

continue pls

[Roozu]

pitch tent.

[gotnotime]

Bros and sis please take note that I may not be able to update regularly coz of commitments to the nation, hence my nickname.
However, here's another update.... :P

Being just 15 years old, I was the youngest, and most outstanding cadet in my squad for the guys. While for her, it was pretty much expected that she's the best female cadet in the squad too.
That came with responsibilities though, as I was made the contingent commander. Seeing her collapse like that scared me out of my wits.
Was it coz I didn't make them drink enough water, or did I push them too hard?

Without further ado, I carried her like a fireman to the school office with air con for her to rest. Ordering my reserve to take command of the practice, I accompanied her in the office.

It was the first time I looked at her in such a situation. So fragile, so delicate, and yet strong, always at loggerheads with me in school, and would dig at me every chance she got.

For the first time, I noticed that the figure-hugging blue npcc uniform complimented her petite figure well, as I tried to wake her up by calling her name. It didn't work, and in a stupid attempt to cool her off, I unbuttoned her uniform, and found out the reason why she passed out. She was wearing her PE T-shirt!

Me: Goddammit, VALERIE!!!
V: WHAT LA! *looks down at her undressed state and tries to slap me*

Instead, I held her wrist and hugged her as she sat on the couch.

Me: Damn you la, so weak, faint on the parade ground some more. What will I do if you die ah, you tell me. How now brown cow?
She couldn't help but laugh out at the last 4 words, and simply told me not to unbutton her uniform when she's unconscious again.

My mind veered off to the other end...
"So it means that I can unbutton her uniform when she's conscious?"

[gotnotime]

The weekend training soon ended with a debrief by our teacher-in-charge, and he asked me to take care of her as I lived the nearest to her.
Dismissing us, we saluted him and went on our way to have lunch with the rest of the squad.

We were walking side by side among the rest of the squad, lost in our own world of yet another squabble, debating on who's the best, until we realised that they disappeared.

"Wa, so loving ah, walk together and leave us behind some more!" Exclaimed jonathan, one of our squadmates, and joker of the squad.
"Ya lor, still so man and carry her to the office wor!" Elaine carried on.

"Wa damn you all ah! I was in command just now what, if I don't carry, then who carry? You carry is it!" I shouted back at them, and held valerie's hand to lead us back to the squad. Which proved to be a big mistake, as our squadmates teased us further.

Lunch soon ended and I sent her back home. In a rare show of affection, I hugged her, whispering in her ears.

Me: Ehh.. Next time drink more water leh, don't make me carry you to the office and undress you la. So tiring.
Val: Wa lao you took advantage of me still say! Don't undress me when I'm unconscious next time hor!
Me: Ehh I was trying my best to cool you down hor! Really 好心没好报 leh!
Val: Whatever la! Just don't take out my uniform if I faint ah, good man!
Me: Okay lor! Then I'll take out your uniform when you're conscious next time. *sticks out tongue at her*
Val: You dare to do that then say, hmph!

And then she closed her door on me.
"What if I dare to do that...?"

[herodieyoung]

Nice.....pls carry on......

[rob_onny]

Bro Gotnotime, ur story sounds familiar leh... like I'd seen it b4...
Pls continue fast... hungry for actions...

[gotnotime]

Originally Posted by rob_onny

Bro Gotnotime, ur story sounds familiar leh... like I'd seen it b4...
Pls continue fast... hungry for actions...

Wa therefore I should put a disclaimer.
This story is fictional and any coincidence to any person or incidents happening in real life is pure coincidental. :P

I'm still working on the last update before sleeping.

[BMW69]

Wah bro! Good job

[gotnotime]

A total of 10 years in both primary and secondary school soon passed by in the blink of an eye, but it was also an eye opener.
Eye opener to how us males view the female body, as we went through puberty. I also began to see Valerie in a different way too, and always seized the chance to make fun of her small but perky B-cuppers when we were alone.

For the past 4 years in secondary school, we have always been at loggerheads, wanting to prove ourselves to be better than the other party whenever the chance arose. Graduation, along with getting our 'O' level certs, came as a question to me.

"What will happen now? Will I still be quarrelling with her? What will happen to her?"

As luck would have it, both of us got the same aggregate score for our 'O' levels!
I still beat her, coz her CCA points only deducted a point, while I was holding the highest rank and appointment within npcc, which meant I had a deduction of 2 points!

Sending her back from school has become a routine ever since that fainting incident, but it suddenly dawned on me that it could be the last time that I'm sending her back home. She seemed to have realised too, as we walked back to her home, quietly enjoying the company of each other.

I still hugged her, tightly this time, for that little longer as I finally confessed to her.

Me: Valerie, I don't wanna leave you, we've been rivals since young, and my life's gonna be so different without you.. Can I be your boyfriend, even if we leave for different schools?

Val: You silly boy, my life will also be different without your teasing all the time. I've won this time, wanted to confess to you but you gave in first! Hahahaha! But to that question... I guess you know the answer hor?

Me: You silly girl!

I let go of her waist, and closing our eyes, oblivious to the world, we kissed for the first time in our lives.

[gotnotime]

Originally Posted by BMW69

Wah bro! Good job

That's how a writer like me gets over a writer's block for a story I guess. By writing a new one! I'll still get back to love and lust when I'm settled down with those emotions though.

[BMW69]

Originally Posted by gotnotime

That's how a writer like me gets over a writer's block for a story I guess. By writing a new one! I'll still get back to love and lust when I'm settled down with those emotions though.

Haha I have ideas for a new one but I'm embracing the dont give up attitude. And I've grown attached to Carrie as a Character, modelling her to perfection. It would be such a waste to start from scratch. And that story holds a special significance to me. It'll be hard for other stories to rival it's accuracy.

[gotnotime]

Originally Posted by BMW69

Haha I have ideas for a new one but I'm embracing the dont give up attitude. And I've grown attached to Carrie as a Character, modelling her to perfection. It would be such a waste to start from scratch. And that story holds a special significance to me. It'll be hard for other stories to rival it's accuracy.

Indeed, the characters in love and lust are also significant to me, but after bashing through so much obstacles, I'm demoralised and need a rest from that before forging ahead like the infantry-trained specialist that I am.
Seems like I'm gonna be working on 2 stories when I'm over it, haha.