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Not scolding TS. I would have done the same thing... I was really rooting for Felicia. but oh well...
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#902
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just out of curiosity, the story until now, you are still in Sec 1 or already move on to Sec 2 or 3. Cos at sec 1, it will be so so damn fortunate to have already encountered so much.
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#903
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still in first yrs actually the later years more boring, but if you say fortunate then in some sense yes, but the heartpain ah. |
#904
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Bro,i have always been a silent reader,
Anyway good job on e story bro,im kinda hooked to it...kept checking for updates...like waiting for my fav sequel... |
#905
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I'm thinking will ann understand after you tell her everything..
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#906
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After listening to Felicia's voicemail, I was torn and tattered. I was worried as I did not know what Felicia would have done, especially knowing that she have taken a pill just now.( I have to admit part of it was I deem Felicia as mine and I was afraid she just go back to her old ways)
I left Felicia a few more voicemails asking her for a chance to talk but she did not reply. I was desperate and I did not have anyone else to turn to, I did have my concerns but I still paged Jasmine for help. She did not reply the first page , I guess due to the unfamiliar number. I left a voicemail for her telling her it was me and it was urgent, she soon called back. Me: Jasmine? Jasmine: What you want? Me: Can you girls go out with Felicia? Jasmine: Why? Did you date her and you cannot make it? Me: Aiya, Just ask her go out, She unstable I scared she take pill again. Jasmine: So serious? Me: yah lah, you faster page her. Jasmine: okok. I ran the risk of the girls knowing about Christina and me, but at that time I guess I worry about Felicia more. I paged Jasmine several times after the call, as I wanted to know if they manage to find Felicia and got her to come out. 20 minutes later, Jasmine left me a voicemail telling me that they were meeting Felicia and She seem moody. Knowing that Felicia is to hang out with Jasmine and Ann somehow gave me some peace. I went home after listening to that voicemail and was preparing myself to lose it all today. |
#907
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why sudden turn to Ann??
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#908
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Nice update i cannot wait for moreee
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#909
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IN my opinion, this story is really appealing to the late 70s and 80s born people cos we can relate in some way or another to the storyline told. This is a really good story with good flow and storyline. If made into a movie in singapore, confirmed it be as big as "Apple in my eye". THe only drawbacks are the sex portion of this story that is hard to present on the big screen. LOL
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#910
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I was at home thinking about Christina and me, I knew I had to give her a answer, and I really don't see a point for her to ask me after she has decided to go. I took a long thought over the matter and decided to enjoy while it lasted, especially knowing I most probably would lose the 3 girls today.
My voicemail to Christina: I will try to hold on, I hope you will too. Christina called me shortly and we spoke, She told me we can write Letters and she will call me at times, she was even trying to figure out the time line asking me to wait for her calls at 3 am. We agreed to talk on the phone once a week and not do the letter part. She said she was busy preparing things with Joanne, and are planning a party before they go off to US. We hung up after she gave me a smooch on the phone, but I did not feel happy. After the call I thought about the things that happened between all of us within this few mths, it was crazy. I started smiling to myself again as I recall the funny moment. I remember the camera that we used during Jasmine's birthday and I took it to be developed (I developed 2 copies), the auntie was kind enough to do it for my in 2 hrs as I told her it was urgent. I remembered it was around 840pm when I went to collect the photos and my pager beeped. I went to the nearest public phone and listened to the voice mail. Jasmine's voicemail: Come to the Macdonald's beside the Terminal now, We need to talk. I took a deep breath knowing it was time for my judgement, I walked towards the Macdonald's with a heavy heart. Entering Macdonald's I found the girls seat in a straight line at the corner of the outlet, I walked towards them and realised that Felicia had cut her hair short( during my time girl cutting their hair short had some meaning to it, it was either they had some resolve or they are trying to forget something). I sat opposite them and took a deep breath before looking up at them. Jasmine: When do you intend to tell Ann and me? Felicia: He must be worried that you don't understand. Jasmine: how he expect me to understand the things he did? Felicia: Maybe he need time to consider? Jasmine: is there anything left to consider? Me: Felicia, You told them ah? Felicia nods |
#911
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i smell trouble
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#912
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i too was a fan of this. got emotionally hooked onto the girls. keep up the good work TS. digested the story in 1 go
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Time in Paradise is up. Looking forward to the next trip soon. |
#914
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something big gonna happen....
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#915
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Believe there will be a twist... what Felicia said is different...
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