My ties

[Avesize]

Originally Posted by ilikeoldchangke

When i started writing, i fear that this day will come

I would like to quote a phrase from one of the bro in sbf, " incest is not an easy pill to swallow "

Although i did not really get a chunk of hate mail, quite a few wrote in to express their views and concerns.

I would like to thank all those who wrote in for their comments and appreciation.
Some of your words weigh heavy on my mind.

Besides, i can't really bring myself to write further on the intimate scenes.
I'm a middle child in the family with both an elder and younger sister, i guess there are some places you are not meant to go afterall

I apologise to the rest of the readers, i will not finish tying up this piece.



Will work on getting another piece out for that boring train journey.

Respect your decisions, coz for me, your write up is so addictive but at the same time, I just don't know to continue reading it or not!

Should u decided not to continue eventually, I will still be waiting for your next write up, eagerly!

[limkh11]

Any sneak preview of your next piece of work?

What kind of stories are we expecting?

[tuakeeteo]

Bro.. Hv been a fan of yrs, may suggest skip Sarah continue wif Fiona pls

[hellotheregoodb]

bro great story la. waiting for the next update

[eeemen]

Bro TS, respect ur decision not to continue with this one, no worries. Will be looking out for your next piece of writing eagerly. Cheers ............................

[BabyJane]

And this is all fiction, yes?

[QUOTE=ilikeoldchangke;7686752]
I would like to quote a phrase from one of the bro in sbf, " incest is not an easy pill to swallow "

[Bangster]

I stopped reading this thread on page 2 because personally it was not my cup of tea.

No offence to TS and I honestly must say this is another fantastic piece of adult literary work by OCK.

Glad to know TS has decided not to continue and instead embark on another story soon.

If you are open to suggestions for topics to write on, may I offer a few of my own:

1. Stalking the beautiful lonely wife of a security guard on shift work... Psycho-ing her to do FL to supplement household income .... ( shit I'll be damned )

2. More revenge stories ...

[mr_missile]

Originally Posted by ilikeoldchangke

I apologise to the rest of the readers, i will not finish tying up this piece.



Will work on getting another piece out for that boring train journey.

oh man....am disapppointed that this story will be discontinued. respect your decision and am cheered up becos u are embarking on another story.

waiting with eager anticipation for it bro.

[Mindy]

ilock bro
i m a newbie here in SBF. i had two offers so far from forumers to show me their dickies. i was curious but could not bring myself to find out the owners of these dick. out of fear maybe of getting into situations i have no control over. i always wonder what if...

1. confront my fear and follow up on the offer. i can imagine the story of 1999 Tom Cruise & Nicole Kidman movie "eye wide shut" where an "odyssey of sexual and moral discovery" awaits me at the other end.

2. find out that the owner of one of the dickies is a man that has all the qualities that i ever wished for in a man. i m attached and imagine my predicament whether to go for better model and dropped the current one or stay loyal to current bf? it is a tough emotional tussle that can be inter-wovened with hot kinky sex...

any potential? hope to learn some writing skill from u...

[HANDFUL]

Originally Posted by Mindy

ilock bro
i m a newbie here in SBF. i had two offers so far from forumers to show me their dickies. i was curious but could not bring myself to find out the owners of these dick. out of fear maybe of getting into situations i have no control over. i always wonder what if...

1. confront my fear and follow up on the offer. i can imagine the story of 1999 Tom Cruise & Nicole Kidman movie "eye wide shut" where an "odyssey of sexual and moral discovery" awaits me at the other end.

2. find out that the owner of one of the dickies is a man that has all the qualities that i ever wished for in a man. i m attached and imagine my predicament whether to go for better model and dropped the current one or stay loyal to current bf? it is a tough emotional tussle that can be inter-wovened with hot kinky sex...

any potential? hope to learn some writing skill from u...

temptations

[SexyStan]

Bro ilock

I respect your decision to close off this thread as it incorporates a subject taboo to most, me included really. In giving my views below, I'm neither encouraging you from reviving it nor am I criticising the views of any person opposed to the thread. It is just my humblest opinions which I feel I should let you as I do have a lot of respect for you and the way you write.

While the subject is taboo to most, the fact remains that you have neither confirmed nor denied it to be fiction, so I shall view this work only from a literrary perspective, free from socio and moral shackles. The greatest of writers have always dealt w/ subjects taboo and controversial in their time, with due credit accorded much later after their time, e.g. Oscar Wilde.

This is a great piece of work, really. I do feel an immense sense of loss, as much as I am extremely disagreeable to the subject of incest, for I loved the way you explored the subject. That's what I feel good writers do anyway, they explore a subject regardless of whether its deemed controversial or not. Alas, like how I respected your decision to start the story, I shall accord equal respect to your decision to end it. I thank you for writing really, for I really don't know of many local writers who can write the way you do, especially in forums.

"The books that the world calls immoral are the books that show the world its own shame." - Oscar Wilde

[yang punk]

Dear ilikeOck

Frankly other then screwing your legally married wife, which form of sex is not taboo? Look at it this way...if we human had a smaller brain and did not develop to our current level of 'civilisation' wouldn't we be fucking like animals...on no holds barred basis!

Whatever lust dictates it has happened before in some corners of the world. Here we are talking about a potential literary sb masterpiece. To many it just entertainment reading how you cleverly weave your stories. To those who have strong moral objections they can easily stop reading, in fact they should stay away from sb forum because they are mentally NOT strong enough to not be corrupted by materials found here.

Just look at the recent 2 cases of sex with underaged prostitutes. Isn't it surprising the kind of people who were caught? From school principal, senior police officer to gentleman of high social standings... Are these indiscretions less damming than sex between half siblings?

Perhaps TS effort may inject more guilt into some of those who are currently guilty of such activities and discourage them from continuing.

From the direction the story was going I detect there will be some sense of guilt and finally common sense will prevail.

My 2 cents worth.

[ilikeoldchangke]

Originally Posted by Mindy

ilock bro
i m a newbie here in SBF. i had two offers so far from forumers to show me their dickies. i was curious but could not bring myself to find out the owners of these dick. out of fear maybe of getting into situations i have no control over. i always wonder what if...

1. confront my fear and follow up on the offer. i can imagine the story of 1999 Tom Cruise & Nicole Kidman movie "eye wide shut" where an "odyssey of sexual and moral discovery" awaits me at the other end.

2. find out that the owner of one of the dickies is a man that has all the qualities that i ever wished for in a man. i m attached and imagine my predicament whether to go for better model and dropped the current one or stay loyal to current bf? it is a tough emotional tussle that can be inter-wovened with hot kinky sex...

any potential? hope to learn some writing skill from u...

Dear Mindy,

I am a little surprised you posted this question to me. I'm hardly the person to go to for this sort of advice, but since you asked, i would answer honestly from the bottom of my heart.

I've never had any girls offering to show me their vaginas via pms before, but i'm pretty sure if they did offer, i would not be stuck without a decision. I do not fear their vagina, i only fear they are under 18 or pretending to be above 18.

To put things in perspective, what these guys are showing you is simply an organ of their body that they use to pee and to pro create. This is hardly the act of a gentlemen, and i hope you are not looking to meet up with them base on the length of their pee tool.

It is never the size of the vessel , it's the sway of the ocean that matters


I am guessing your inbox is full by now which is why i did not pm you my reply. There is nothing to fear.

I would suggest if you decided to go ahead and meet up , do let the rest of the forum viewers know how it went. You only live once.


To answer your second question, i too wished that a sbf sister that has plans to flash me her vagina, carries all the qualities i look for in a woman, but sadly the qualities i look for in a wife does not include flashing of her vagina to sbf readers.

Personally i won't mix hot kinky sex with emotional attachment. Maybe because i'm a guy. I can have really hot kinky sex without emotional baggage. ( sbf sisters can start flashing me your vaginas now )



To summarise,

I think you should meet me instead


Would definitely write about you to share with the rest of the sbf community





Jokes aside.


Follow your gut, fortune favours the brave. You never know who you are going to meet, you might really get what you are looking for.

Then again, would you want the man of your dreams to be flashing his dickies about in sbf ?

[ilikeoldchangke]

Originally Posted by SexyStan

Bro ilock

I respect your decision to close off this thread as it incorporates a subject taboo to most, me included really. In giving my views below, I'm neither encouraging you from reviving it nor am I criticising the views of any person opposed to the thread. It is just my humblest opinions which I feel I should let you as I do have a lot of respect for you and the way you write.

While the subject is taboo to most, the fact remains that you have neither confirmed nor denied it to be fiction, so I shall view this work only from a literrary perspective, free from socio and moral shackles. The greatest of writers have always dealt w/ subjects taboo and controversial in their time, with due credit accorded much later after their time, e.g. Oscar Wilde.

This is a great piece of work, really. I do feel an immense sense of loss, as much as I am extremely disagreeable to the subject of incest, for I loved the way you explored the subject. That's what I feel good writers do anyway, they explore a subject regardless of whether its deemed controversial or not. Alas, like how I respected your decision to start the story, I shall accord equal respect to your decision to end it. I thank you for writing really, for I really don't know of many local writers who can write the way you do, especially in forums.

"The books that the world calls immoral are the books that show the world its own shame." - Oscar Wilde

Bro, thank you for the compliment,
I'm really flattered by your comments, and i appreciate the support.

I'm just looking to kill a bit of time and provide some entertainment at the same time to the forum goers.

Will definitely work on getting better pieces out for all.

[ilikeoldchangke]

Originally Posted by yang punk

Dear ilikeOck

Frankly other then screwing your legally married wife, which form of sex is not taboo? Look at it this way...if we human had a smaller brain and did not develop to our current level of 'civilisation' wouldn't we be fucking like animals...on no holds barred basis!

Whatever lust dictates it has happened before in some corners of the world. Here we are talking about a potential literary sb masterpiece. To many it just entertainment reading how you cleverly weave your stories. To those who have strong moral objections they can easily stop reading, in fact they should stay away from sb forum because they are mentally NOT strong enough to not be corrupted by materials found here.

Just look at the recent 2 cases of sex with underaged prostitutes. Isn't it surprising the kind of people who were caught? From school principal, senior police officer to gentleman of high social standings... Are these indiscretions less damming than sex between half siblings?

Perhaps TS effort may inject more guilt into some of those who are currently guilty of such activities and discourage them from continuing.

From the direction the story was going I detect there will be some sense of guilt and finally common sense will prevail.

My 2 cents worth.

You are right. Your last sentence pretty much sums up the outline.
Common sense does prevailed in the end, but not before making the mistake.