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Sarah
There seems to be something bothering Kevin ever since he came back from the conference. I guessed it did not go well. He had worked too hard for the family while I had neglected his needs. I would understand if he had strayed. I did not care if he had but what’s most important to me was to win him back. We, the family needed him and I love him dearly. I had it all planned out, thanks to Her World. I had bought revealing lingerie for the night. All I needed was for him to return home and I would show him what a good wife I was. Kevin It was almost eleven when I got back home. The house was dark I guessed all the kids had sleep. I had phoned earlier to inform Sarah that I would not be back for dinner. I walked to our room expecting Sarah to be asleep by now. When I entered the room I could sense a wiff of scented smell. The room had candles lit up at all four corners. Appearing from the toilet stood Sarah. She was wearing a red-hot lingerie. The candle shot partially through her lingerie and I could see she wore nothing between her legs. I was stunned. “Had a hard day darling” Sarah spoke after sensing my shock. She moved towards me and put her arms on my neck. She kiss me gently on the mouth and withdrew. “Sit down and I shall give you a massage” I obeyed and sat on the bed. She went behind me and start massaging my neck followed by me back. She leaned forward to unbutton my shirt removing them slowly. I felt her hands on my skin and got excited. She kissed my neck then my back she then turn to face me kneeling in-front of me. She took out my belt and pants. “Lay on the bed” she suggested. I was naked. She climbed onto me moving her body onto mine. I could feel the soft material of her lingerie dragging smoothly along my body. She reached down to my manhood. I was pleasantly surprised by her actions. She was gentle unlike Molly. She did it with care and a little hesitant and shyness it made me even more excited. I sat up and hold her hands motioning her to get up. I slipped her lingerie down and saw how beautiful she was. We made love. I was sure it was love and not some animal sex. After the lovemaking I did not felt satisfied as I usually felt with Molly. It was more than that. It was love. Sex was just the communication tool. Sarah shyly got up while grabbing a blanket to cover herself. “I need to wash up” she said. My mobile beeps, I read the SMS. It was Molly “He hit me. Please come now!” |
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Thanks all bros that up me or simply encouraged me. I am glad some bros liked it. I am likely to need some time to formulate the ending of the story. Anyway once i have any update will post them here. cheers
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wow.. terrific story line my fren ... very good very good ... too bad , i dun think i can up u .. sorry dude ...
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no points required to read the story.
continue ... Surachai I walked into the room in anticipation. It was a month since my last visit here. The owner had called to inform me of new arrival and I could not wait to sample them. When I stepped into the room I saw a typical fish thank. In there, stood all the “goods”. Immediately I focused on number 762. He was a handsome boy, I guess he was about 13 years old just the type I wanted. I spoke to the owner, informing him of my interest. Number 762 came over and sat next to me. I put my hand on his little shoulder he was a little shy. I felt that he tensed upon my touch. “It’s ok boy. I will not harm you” I smiled “Yes Sir” he spoke with a little fear. “Let’s go upstairs and I will show you how to have a good time” I led him to the stairways. The boy seems unsure, he kept look back that the owner. The owner signaled him to follow me. I liked some fear it increases the excitement. The big guy in the second floor stood up when he saw me and pointed to room number 3. We went into the room and I dimmed the light a little. New stocks were always shy and the dimmed environment helped to make them feel comfortable. I took off all my clothes and signal the boy to do the same. He hesitantly removed them. I signaled for him to move towards me and kneel down on his knees. “BANG!” the door broke opened. In came 4 policemen. “You are being arrested for having sex with a minor” one of them said. This was a nightmare, it could not be happening to me. The owner assured me they are safe and that he paid of the local authority. What would my family think? They would not understand my needs. My life had just ended. I need to do something quick. At the police station I asked to speak to the chief inspector. He came into my cell an hour later. “You asked to see me? This better be good” He snarled. “I don’t really enjoy speaking to scum like you” “Please sir, please do not charge me, my family would be shamed and my life would be over. I can be charged with robbery, rape or even murder but not this. Please I beg you.” I begged. “You should had known better when you took the boy to the room and I am sure this was not your first time. People like you should be shamed too bad your family have to suffer as well” “No sir, I will give you more sensational information about blackmail, murder and rape as long as you promised to remove my charge on child sex” I offered, it was my last chance. I rather die with dignity. “I am listening” said the inspector.
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ok folks the end is near. stay tune. should finish in the next hour or so.
continue ... Kevin I told Sarah I had a mate in trouble and I need to go and help out. She did not object. I quickly changed and headed towards Molly’s home. When I reached her home the door was ajar. I let myself in and found her in the bedroom sobbing un-controllably. I went forward to hug her and lifted her head. I saw bruises on her forehead and she must has been crying for some time as her eyes were red and swollen. “He hit me. Steven did this to me. I cannot take it anymore.” She cried. “You shouldn’t” I said. She moved herself to face me and gave a kiss. “Would you take care of me?” she looked into my eyes. I move my eyes to focus on something eyes “I would not like to see you suffer.” I managed. I had just realized that all I had done (with Molly) were wrong. I knew it was my wife I loved and not Molly but this was not the right time to come clean with her. “Go wash up first, I will stay here tonight to keep you company and we can work out what to do.” That’s the least I could do for her. She got up and went to the toilet while I sat on the bed. I took out my mobile think of SMSing my wife to inform her I would not be back but the phone slipped from my hand and fell onto the floor. I bent down to pick it up and saw a stack of papers under the bed. Out of curiosity I took out a few pieces. I was shock to find that they were actually blown up black and white photograph. What was more shocking was that the photographs contains picture of Gary naked. On close inspection, standing next to him was the same 3 Thai guys that had kidnapped me recently. I lost all consciousness.
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coming up ... the final installment.
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Inspector Ong
Ok folks, I was just on the phone with my Bangkok counterpart, they had information of a murder, rape and kidnap case with the mastermind believed to be staying in Singapore. Once they faxed over all the information, we would move out to find the mastermind and bring her in. Molly I had no choice. He should not have seen all these. We were supposed to live happily ever after like all fairytale. Why must God treat me this way? I would explain to him, he loved me, he would understand. I rubbed some medical oil on his nose to wake him. Kevin It was a blur; I felt something hard hitting me on the back of my head. Now I waked by the strong medical oil smell. I saw that Molly was smiling at me. I remembered the photographs under her bed. “Why?” I managed. “Because they deserved it. Unlike you they did not try to save me” she said matter-of-factly. “You pass, you protected me. You would rather they rape you then me. You the one I have been waiting for and I am ready for you.” “You mean all was a setup? It just your sick test to get the right man?” I felt fear follow by anger. “How could you?” I knew the answer myself. She could do whatever she wanted I wasn’t exactly a saint myself. I dug my own grave. I was not interested in what she wanted but I need to come clean with her. “You are wrong, I was wrong too. Our relationship was a mistake. I love my wife” I did not know how to put it. This was the best I could say. “NO!” she screamed. “You are mine and you LOVE ME!” now hysterical. “You would not die for your wife but you have proven you are willing to do it for me. We are meant together don’t you see. Kevin” She pleaded. “You got it wrong, I would have done the same for a normal lady friend. This was how I was brought up. It does not mean you are special. I am sorry, Molly. I hope you understand. I love my wife and kids I need to go back to them. I cannot be always be with you” I bowed slightly obviously not liking whatever I said. “I would help you in whatever way but to demand my full love, I am sorry I cannot give you. I need to go now. I need to sort myself out too.” I started to walk towards the main door. Molly This was not happening, Kevin chose his cheap wife over me. And now he was walking out of my life. He was the man, I was sure. I could not allow him to leave me. He did not know what he was doing. I walked into the kitchen, grabbed a knife and walked towards him. I would just scare him to stay so I could reason with him. “KEVIN” I shouted to halt him. He turned back. Silence.. Inspector Ong By the time we reached Molly’s house all we saw was a dead body on the living room’s floor with a pool of blood. It was a deadly knife wound, the victim probably died from lost of blood. We went into the kitchen and saw someone sitting on a stool looking into the night sky. I looked at the face with the assistance of moonlight. I recognized the face from one of the faxes we received from the Thai police. I stepped forward. Kevin “I am Inspector Ong from Singapore Police. Mr Kevin Tan Chee Hong. You are arrested for the murder of Molly Lim Ah Mui. You have the right to ………” I felt only emptiness.
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THE END
so how folks? can cut it or not har? i personally think the ending a bit weak lah. knn built up so much ending like tat only like anti climax leh. anyway this one the longest story i have written so far. Total 23 Microsoft Page siah. Any bro want a soft copy PM me you email i will send out. cheers
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clap clap clap.....
standing ovation........ very well written story bro...
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very good story bro!!
different setup from e normal stories, makes it refreshing.. |
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U can be a director man. 3 Claps for you. cheers,
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well done ricardo!!
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thanks all bro for the support.
I have decided to repay your support with new stories. But now no inspiration yet must do research first. Time to head down to Geylang to immerse myself in deep research.
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gd story! i read the story abt the disabled too..but this one is way better
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big round of applause for the MAN !!!! should pass ur scripts to TCS to make it into a movie ..........
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